Week Four Critique

As per usual, we spent most of the class doing group critiques and getting feedback on our work. This week, I presented a brochure which has been refined quite a lot, and my first poster concept. As expected, there are only a few changes to make on the brochure, but a lot to make on the poster, since it was my first effort. I have attached the spreads and poster below:

Above, I decided to attach all of the spreads to the blog post as one big sheet, to give a fair idea of how it looks folded out and printed/stuck together at the full A2 scale. I have included most of the feedback of what I need to change in my physical workbook, on each printed spread/poster. By next week, I am hoping to have my brochure pretty much finished, to a point where there are only the most minor of tweaks to be made. With my poster, I would like to get it to a point where there are a few suggestions on what to change, although these also being pretty minor. Therefore for the next week I will work on these steadily to that I can have a much more refined output for our final critique before hand-in.